My relax place

very intersting in to tell you about my relax place. It is very queit and romantic to relax. Clean beach , beautiful mountain. You can enjoy one short time to swim on the blue beach, climp mountain, fly a kite on the afternoon, and lying on the beach, fish out hook. We will open on May. Let's you discovery wild and natural sights in my place.

Please post contact details or your website. Thanks.

to the OP, I recommend you either hire or consult a marketing expert.

as soon as you post anything about a business here it's going to be cleaned up by an admin, so not much point in even starting in. 

it's nice that they're aggressive about getting rid of spam but the posts content does get a bit monotonous, one person after another asking about work options somewhere.  spam wouldn't make for better reading but there must be some middle ground related to Vietnamese leisure.  I was just in Vietnam at the end of last year and it was really cool, but then I only saw what tourists tend to see.

that first post language content isn't going to work well as English language based marketing.